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:C: Louise Ethel Marine

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final part of a commission for ~Shiupai
I hope you love it!
Her OC Louise Ethel Mariné
If you want the non-watermark version please note me.
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I only get like a certain amount of computer a day now so if your waiting on something it might take a little while longer :P
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Sorry for the sucky critique in advance, I'm still not used to writing these :L
I think this is a really cute piece to start off. The proportions for chibi are pretty good with minor errors! Also, I absolutely love the dress, it's cute!
Okay, now for the advice. First, I think the shading is a little messy. Try picking one over all light source and working from that, it might help. Also, don't rush, it'll look a lot better!
Secondly, I know it's chibi but the left arm/hand is a little too distorted. Try drawing the right amount of fingers/stubs and making the bend more crisp and straight.

I love the way you do the hair, this is just a tip! Try doing the shading on an above layer messing with the opacity and on an overlay or luminosity layer. You may like how it turns out! (: